The past year I worked on narration and breaking up dialogue with narration.
I have an awful habit having long streams of dialogue with the occasional bit of narration thrown in.
My wife and my writing group have called me out on this.
Fixing this in the he last few short stories and the last novel I finished have been my goals.
Knowing what’s wrong with your writing. Having a support team to tell you what’s wrong is part of the journey of writing. Sometimes their words hurt. Sometimes you’ll want to scream, but almost always, what they tell you will improve your prose.
Fifteen years ago, when I wrote my first novel, I didn’t take criticism well. After time, I realized it’s meant to help me improve.
I wish I’d had a writing group when I started. I only had my wife. She was extra cautious when critiquing because at that point, I wasn’t a very nice person.
Today, I’m better than I was. I wish I’d have learned earlier that honest critiques can be brutal. Especially if you’re not ready for honesty.
I hope your writing is going well.